The Coil Beneath the Bridge: A Legend of the Serpentine “Mamba”
A tale of a green‑veined stone, a thirsty valley, and the courage to step through a shadowed door.
In the valley of Siltwater, where the stream’s voice usually braided gossip with birdsong, the year came up dry. The old bridge, a single arch of slate and serpentinite, yawned over stones that remembered water only by the smell of it. Beneath one parapet, set into the bridge like a heart set behind ribs, lived a green stone veined with night—our people called it the Mamba for the way its dark webbing wound through the body of the stone like sleeping coils. Travelers tapped it with two fingers for luck. Children pressed their cheeks against its cool face in summer. Fisherfolk laid the first trout of the season beside it to thank the river. But that year the trout never came.
Marin, apprentice to the stone‑keepers, had begun to count the dry days as a game and then stopped, because games should not make your mother’s hands so restless or your neighbors whisper so quietly. Marin’s family kept records on slabs as well as in books: thin tiles of serpentinite rubbed with chalk, dates and levels scratched with bone stylus, then rinsed clean when rains began. The slate shelf behind the door should have been messy with past weather; it sat suspiciously tidy. Each morning, Marin touched the Mamba set into the bridge wall and listened for the river murmur trapped inside. Each morning, there was only the sigh of dust.
Most bridges have a legend. Ours had two: one that elders said and one that no one said aloud. The first told how the bridge had been built over a spring‑mouth too wide to step but too narrow to ferry. A stonemason found a green stone in the hills—a piece of serpent’s road, he called it—and set it under the arch so water would always remember the path. The second story, the quiet one, said that the stone was only the visible scale of something much larger that slept beneath the ridge: a guardian coiled in on itself, with a back of veined green and a belly of cool shadow. It had watched the valley since the mountains drank seawater and learned to speak in mineral. On the night of the first Mamba drought, Marin dreamed that the coil opened one eye like a lantern.
In the dream, a voice neither wholly voice nor sound of water spoke from within the stone. It came like breath on glass, fog writing on a windowpane. Little keeper, it said, you’ve turned the pages and counted the days. Do you know how to count an absence? Marin woke with the taste of iron on the tongue and the sense of gravel under the ribs. In the darkness, a rhyme arrived, old as handwork, simple as walking. Marin whispered it, half to test it and half in case anyone was listening.
“Coil of green, keep watch, keep wide;
Scale of shade, be at my side.
River‑heart, remember me—
Open stone and set us free.”
In the morning, the rhyme clung like dew to thought. Marin took the path up to the old quarry not to cut—no one cut in drought—but to listen to stone the way one listens to a sleeping house. Siltwater’s hill wore its geology openly: bands of green serpentinite with dark lashes of magnetite and chromite, pale stitches of calcite where old fractures had been mended by time. Serpentinized peridotite, the master had muttered with affection and chalky hands. A rock with a story: ocean floor lifted, mantle watered, heat taught to speak softly. Marin ran fingertips over a polished offcut left from an older project. It was like touching cold wax, like touching water’s memory.
At the quarry rim stood Els, the oldest of the stone‑keepers, scarf whipping like a pennant. She looked at Marin, then out at the river’s dull braid. “It’s worse today,” she said, as if the stone would object otherwise. “You heard it, didn’t you? The night gives you the real numbers.” Marin nodded, because Els didn’t waste questions. “The Mamba can sleep a century,” Els went on, “but it sleeps with one ear to the door. Something’s shut that door.” She cupped a hand around her mouth and called to the slope, not with words but with a long, low hum that made the skin on Marin’s arms shiver. “We’re going to look,” she said. “You’re coming.”
They walked the route no one takes unless they keep keys for a living: along the fault line where rock had once slipped on rock, polished dark and slick as fish skin—slickensides, Els called it, always with a little smile at the word. They stepped across outcrops that looked like green thunderclouds frozen in stone. Here and there the earth had broken and healed itself with pale calcite; some veins were knife‑thin threads, some were fat ribbons. “Bones mended by time,” Els said, “and sometimes by impatient hands. The green likes to break and be beautiful about it. Don’t we all.” Marin laughed, even in worry, because Els’s jokes were invitation and permission. It felt good to be invited.
Half a league from the bridge, the fault widened into a gash roofed in brambles and fig. A trickle sounded within—more wish than water—and there, on the rock face, someone had set iron hooks and ropes. Not recent, but not old. Els touched one, then the dark stain below. “Someone pulled the hinge‑stone,” she said, voice as flat as slate. “If you’ve ever tried to push a door that opens toward you, you know the feeling. Our river’s stuck on the wrong side.” Marin knelt. Powder lay like grey breath at the base of the crack. “Ground,” they said, rubbing fingers and grimacing. Els nodded grimly. “Sawn. The dust tells on the work like flour on a baker’s apron.”
“Who would cut a hinge‑stone?” Marin whispered. “Someone who wanted a private spring,” Els said. “Someone with land up‑ridge and debts down‑valley. Or someone who thinks water is a thing you own instead of something you keep.” She straightened. “There’s only one way to wake a door that’s been told to sleep. We go to the Coil and ask.” Marin did not say, Ask what? With Els, you didn’t clutter a top layer that foam already wanted. You followed to see where the current led.
They returned at dusk, each with a lantern and a basket. In Marin’s, wrapped in soft cloth, lay the chalk‑tiles of the rain records and a thin slab polished on one side to a friendly shine. In Els’s, a different cargo: a wedge of bread, a twist of salt, three river pebbles, and a coil of green rope. “Ritual,” she said, not reverently but like a carpenter saying level. “Useful because we remember through our hands.” At the bridge they tapped the Mamba twice, then pressed their foreheads to it in turn. The stone felt cooler than the evening. In the lanternlight, its dark veining gleamed like road maps at night, all the little towns lit.
Beneath the bridge was a maintenance door no one used but the stone‑keepers. Els cleared cobwebs with the rope, then drew a chalk circle on the flagstones. “Names go here,” she said, “and measures there.” Marin set the rain tiles around the circle in a ring like months around a year. Els set the bread and salt in the center and the pebbles in a little arc, the way people set small moons around big ones in teaching diagrams. Marin placed the polished slab on the south edge, where a person coming from the village could see their face in it. “We’re reminding the place who it is,” Els said softly. “Sometimes that’s enough.” Marin breathed, and the rhyme returned. Not a spell exactly—our valley is thrifty with that word—but close to a promise.
“Hinge of river, hinge of stone,
What was shared is not a loan.
Coil of green, unstop the way—
Open, open: water, stay.”
The bridge answered with a long creak like a tired door in winter. Marin felt the change before they heard it: a subtle pressure in the ears, a cold kiss on the ankles, the way the house feels when someone opens a window two rooms away. Somewhere inside the arch, an old seam admitted a little air and then a little water. It hit dust and turned it to dark paste that smelled like the first day of spring cleaning. Marin laughed without meaning to. Els’s hand found their shoulder and squeezed. “Good,” she said. “Not enough, but good. The Coil heard us; it’s shifting.” She raised her lantern high and peered into the dark. “Tomorrow we go under. Eat well, sleep long. Bring a second pair of socks.”
That night, Marin dreamed again. This time the Coil did not speak words but showed memory: the ancient day when the mountain met the ocean and drank until its hot heart hissed and softened; the long slow growth of sheets and fibers in its body until it could bend without breaking; the patient self‑repair when faults tore; the magnetite sown like seeds of night across the green. The Coil gathered all that history into the weight of a head resting on its own tail. It was not exactly a serpent and not exactly a river. If you have ever watched a log turn in an eddy and thought How does it move with such dignity?, you have felt the Coil pass under your bridge.
Dawn smeared the hills with peach. Marin met Els by the weir, where the weakest water still practiced at being river. They went down by a tunnel the old masons had used, a low corridor smelling of lime and wet rope. At the end of it, a room waited that no one had entered in a generation: a culvert now half cave, half hallway, where the sides were lined in green and the ceiling spider‑cracked with pale veins. In the middle of the floor, laid on a plinth of old brick, sat a sister to the Mamba in the bridge—smaller, but with the same sleep‑dark veining. A hinge‑stone. Or rather: the other hinge‑stone. This one had been wrestled from its bed—stains still on the brick—cut on one edge, and set here like a trophy.
Els touched the hacked edge and winced like a musician hearing a string out of tune. “They took the stop,” she said. “And left the latch. That’s why the water sulks instead of sings.” Marin set down the polished slab and, without planning, spoke to it like a friend. “We’re going to take you home,” they said. “But you know we can’t drag you back by force.” Els nodded. “The old door won’t consent to bruise. The Coil wants a promise longer than our arms. Make one.”
Promises in our valley are made with food and time. Marin put the bread on the plinth and pinched salt over it. They set the pebbles in a line like stepping‑stones and the rain tiles in a fan, wetting each with water from a skin so the chalk numbers swam. Then, because their hands needed to say something they hadn’t learned yet, they took the chalk and drew on the floor: a crooked map of the river as it should be, with eddies like commas and gravel islands like little dialogues. Els watched and then added what Marin had forgotten: the side spring by the hemp field; the back‑eddy old Otter liked; the slippery rock where the kids taught themselves to be brave by jumping in feet first. When they were done, Marin faced the hinge‑stone and said the rhyme, longer now, more sure.
“Hinge of river, hinge of door,
Sleepy lock, resist no more.
Coil of green, unbind the seam;
Guide us by your under‑dream.
Scale of shade and leaf‑bright light,
Warden, wake and set it right.”
The floor trembled. Not a quake; a settling. The chalk map blurred where thin water ran over it, first hesitant, then eager as a child joining a game late but wholeheartedly. The hinge‑stone glowed from inside like a field of bottle glass with sun behind it. Els leaned in and spoke not in words but in weights—any keeper will tell you the language of stone is part pressure, part patience. She shifted the plinth bricks, gave the stone a path, and then stood back. The hinge‑stone slid. Not much, not even a hand’s breadth—but where it moved, the sound in the room deepened from drip to trickle to a small, serious stream hugging the base of the wall.
They followed it by lanternlight. The tunnel was at times generous and at times mean, rising to let them breathe and dropping to make them curse gently and bravely. They came at last to a place where the rock folded in on itself like the inside of a shell. Here, the roof arched low over a basin cut in green. In that bowl lay the heart of the dry year: a plug of rubble, wire‑tangled and shored with boards, hammered in and painted with a smear of hateful red. On one board, someone had scrawled a name—the sort of owner’s mark that wants to turn a promise into a property line. The water had attempted politeness for months, asking to pass; you could see where it tried, how it polished one corner and trickled another smooth. It had not pushed. Water is patient, but our valley’s water prefers consent.
“We can pry it,” Marin said, and Els nodded, “and we will. But that name is a spell, and we’ll break it first with a better one.” They erased the name with a wet thumb, then wrote Kept for All in chalk and circled it. Together, they wedged planks and pulled wire, softening each rude motion with murmured apologies to the stone. The plug loosened like a stubborn tooth. It came free with a belch of old air. Water shoved through at once, delighted with itself, then stopped in confusion at the insult of debris piled beyond. “Gently,” Els told it, as if calming a young goat, and Marin laughed again, because why wouldn’t you talk to a river like that?
When the plug rolled aside, the bowl filled. Not a torrent; a steady bowlful that overflowed when it was ready and found the chalk‑map channel the keepers had drawn. They followed the thread back the way they had come. At the bridge, the Mamba throbbed under their hands as if pleased, as if the stone enjoyed applause. Marin pressed their ear to it and heard—no metaphor—the Coil shifting its weight with the contented sound old furniture makes when you sit in your grandmother’s chair and it remembers you.
The river did not become a river all at once. It staged its return like a careful host: the first night, a trickle; the second, a silver ribbon you could cup without losing any; the third, a run you could cross with your boots in your hand and a good sense of balance. On the fourth day, the fish nosed up and considered the low stone under the bridge parapet and accepted the invitation. Someone brought a drum and someone else a pan, and someone passed cups, and everyone pretended they were not watching the Mamba glow in the lanternlight as if with its own shy pride. The old folks said the second story aloud for the first time in many years: that the bridge stone is the Coil’s scale, and that the Coil keeps the door as long as we keep the promise.
The person whose name had been painted on the plug came down from the ridge with two men who looked like invoices in boots. He had documents. Els had a basin of river water and twenty neighbors. The man recited numbers and said that stones belong to whoever signs for them. Els nodded and dipped her fingers into the basin. “So do promises,” she said, and flicked water onto the papers. The ink spread like wet crow tracks until the numbers looked like wading birds and then like nothing legible at all. “If you want to own a river,” she said, “carry it.” She held out the basin. It was bigger than a helmet, heavier than pride. The man could not lift it without help. The neighbors smiled softly, the way you smile when a child learns an important lesson by dropping something harmless and watching it bounce.
“You made your point,” the man said, but Els shook her head. “No, the river made its own. We only translated.” She turned to the gathered people. “We will set a new rule, old as slate: no one cuts the hinge‑stones, no one names what keeps itself. We will keep records in two languages—from the sky, and from the green.” She raised Marin’s polished slab so the crowd could see their faces in it. “If you forget, the stone will remember. If the stone forgets, we will remind it with our work.” Marin had never loved a sentence so much. It felt like a job offer from the earth.
That evening, by lanterns hung from the bridge like a string of moons, the valley made a new festival out of the half‑remembered old one. They called it Mamba Night. On it, each household brought a small stone—not from the riverbed (we leave those to the water) but from the field margins where the plough set them aside. They wrote on the stones with chalk: something to shed, something to keep. The keep went in a basket under the Mamba. The shed went into the river to watch it be carried away. Marin stood with the other keepers and listened to a chorus of soft splashes. It sounded like a thousand tiny goodbyes and a thousand tiny hopes arriving, both at once.
“Coil of green, our threshold friend,
Guard beginnings, grant good end.
River‑heart, remember, flow—
Keep us humble. Help us grow.”
In the weeks that followed, Marin and Els rehoused the second hinge‑stone properly in the culvert, not seated like a prisoner but poised like a partner. They mended the plinth with brick and lime, not cement that bullies a joint into forgetting how to move. They adjusted the map of chalk to match where the water chose to go, because the best maps are apologies to the land for what we guessed wrong. Marin learned the sound of slate being pleased: it is just the absence of complaint, plus a little shine the next morning.
Travelers came through and tapped the Mamba again as if it were a throat clearing before a toast. Children pressed their cheeks to it and reported that it felt like a cloud that had signed a contract to be stone but kept a clause about softness. A woman from upriver who made carvings out of green stone for a living stood under the arch and nodded to herself. “Your polish is honest,” she told Els. “You didn’t chase glass. You let it be wax.” Els bowed a little, as one craftswoman to another. Marin tried to stand very still and soak up the compliment by proximity, the way a lizard soaks sun.
When the next dry year came, it did what such years do: arrived late and then all at once. But the valley did not hold its breath as it had before. We had learned how to count an absence, which is the same as counting what you have and what you promised. The keepers made rounds, checking for plugs and hooks, firm as chaperones, polite as nurses. Children knew the rhymes and liked the part where you got to say “open” twice, loud; then they liked the part where you had to be quiet and listen for the stone answering back. People brought pebbles not as taxes but as love letters to the river. One clever soul carved a little sign that read, No Mamba? No crossing. Nobody tested it. In our valley, we are not brave about the wrong things.
Marin grew into the job the way a river grows into its bed: by finding where the edges let them be, and where the bend preferred patience over drama. On the day Els handed over the key—an old thing of iron with its own geologic memory—she also handed over a thin slip of paper worn nearly through from being folded. On it were three lines, familiar and faithful as a well‑used chisel. “Use them,” Els said, “when the door won’t listen. Use them when you won’t listen. Use them when you’ve forgotten what listening is.” Marin nodded, then laughed, because sometimes you must let joy have the floor. “I will,” they said, and touched the Mamba twice as if tapping a friend on the shoulder. The stone hummed through the skin and into the bones like a tuning note, the one the choir takes before the song begins.
Years later, a stranger in a dusty hat and with shoes that had met more than one road arrived with a question that should have been a confession. “Who owns the river?” he asked, as if asking for directions to a market stall. Marin, who had learned to answer questions with air and time before words, took up a basin, filled it, and offered it to the stranger to hold while they talked. In the sheen of the water, the stranger saw the bridge and the stone and his own face, tired and maybe ready to be a little less so. The basin grew heavier not so much because water wanted to fall as because time wanted to be honest. The stranger put it down. “I see,” he said. Then he smiled at the Mamba and, almost shyly, tapped it twice.
When Marin tells the story now, they do not start with the drought or the plug or the name on the board. They start with the old masons and the idea of a hinge‑stone: a piece of world that makes sure the door remembers it is a door. They tell the dream of the Coil, because you should meet your neighbors, especially the very slow ones. They show the chalk tiles of rain and invite line additions—new children, new gardens, a place where the river scours out a swimming hole every third year as if practicing generosity. And always, before the last lantern is blown, Marin speaks the rhyme and the valley speaks it back, not because the stone will sulk if it is not sung to, but because people are happier when they say what they want together.
“Coil of green, keep watch, keep wide;
Scale of shade, be at our side.
River‑heart, remember, flow—
We will keep what we should know.”
What began as a legend under a bridge became the valley’s way of living: that doors open best when asked with care; that names can be spells either greedy or good; that water prefers partnership; that stones have long memories and short patience for unkindness; that serpentine is a kind of soft‑spoken book anyone can learn to read. As for the Mamba, it no longer seemed like a magic coin glued into the world for luck, but like a window. Through it, people could see the long, ordinary miracle that held them together: a river, a promise, and a green with night running through it like the roads of home on a clear evening. If the Coil was still sleeping, it slept with one ear to the door. If awake, it listened like a mountain does—by leaning in so slightly that only those who love the place would notice. And really, that’s all a legend asks: not that you believe without question, but that you listen until the question drinks.